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Editorial
Emendations
Changes
to The Emigrant in The Poetical Works
of Alexander McLachlan (1900)
As discussed
in the Introduction, pp. lii-liii, the version of The
Emigrant contained in The Poetical Works of
Alexander McLachlan (Toronto: William Briggs, 1900),
pp. 209-256 differs in a variety of ways from the first
edition of the poem, upon which the present edition
is based. Since some of these changes appear to have
emanated from McLachlan, they are clearly of interest
and are therefore recorded in this Appendix. What follows
is the Argument that precedes The Emigrant
in The Poetical Works and a list of all the
differences between the 1861 and 1900 texts of the poem.
In the list, the reading of the first edition appears
before the “]” and that of The Poetical
Works after the “]”. For example, the
entry under Introduction “2 the winter's ] stern
Winter’s” indicates that, where the first
edition has “the winter’s”, The
Poetical Works has “stern Winter’s.”
Throughout the poem in The Poetical Works (hereafter,
PW), the stanza numbers have been changed from
the “I.”, “II.”, etc. of the
first edition to “I”, “II”,
etc.
ARGUMENT
Introduction:
The poet apostrophizes Canada as a land where Nature's
operations are on a large scale, and which, though without
extended national history, yet supplies a theme for
the poet in the struggles of the pioneer settlers. [Page
111]
| I,
53 |
we
had ] we’d (E.) |
| IV,
103 |
Sentiment’s
] Sentiments (E.) |
| IV,
145 |
other’s
] others |
| IV,
146 |
other’s
] others |
| V, 247 |
“‘Arise
] “Arise |
| V, 248 |
King.’”
] King.” |
| V, 249 |
“He
] He |
| V, 257 |
“And
] And |
| V, 260 |
dell.”
] dell. |
| VI,
110 |
slowly
on. ] slowy on |
| VI,
168 |
rattle-snake
] ratlle-snake |
| VII,
3 |
log-built
] log built |
| VII,
9 |
youth,
] youth. |
| VII,
12 |
John
o’ Groat’s ] John O’ Groat’s |
| VII,
52 |
Corybrechtan
] Corybrechtain |
| VII,
136 |
peace.
] peace, |
| VII,
144 |
more.”
] more.’ |
| VII,
184 |
befel
] befel, |
| VII,
292 |
divinity,
] divinity. |
| VII,
306-307 |
XIII.
] XII. |
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