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These
notes record all editorial emendations in the
present text to the first edition of Lake
Lyrics and Other Poems. Each entry contains
the reading of the present text before the "]"
and the reading of the first edition after the
"]". Thus, "30 a-clanging
] a clanging" indicates that in line 30 of
the poem "Autumn's Chant" a hyphen has
been added between the words "a" and
"clanging" where there is none in the
first edition.
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PART
ONE
|
| The
Winter Lakes |
| 13 |
|
spectres
] specters
|
| Keziah
|
| 2 |
|
its
] it's |
| 8 |
|
weird
] wierd
|
| In
the River Bay |
| 8 |
|
scintillate
] scintilate |
| 38 |
|
its
] it's |
| 42 |
|
its
] it's |
| 42 |
|
its
] it's
|
| Manitou |
| 16 |
|
sun-god
] Sun-god
|
| Autumn's
Chant |
| 30 |
|
a-clanging
] a clanging
|
| A
Lyric of Weariness |
| 19 |
|
weird
] wierd |
| 22 |
|
its
] it's
|
| August
Evening on the Beach, Lake Huron |
| 9 |
|
diaphanous
] diaphonous
|
| At
the Landing |
| 20 |
|
undreamed-of ] undreamed of
|
| The
Legend of Dead Man's Lake |
| 8 |
|
'Twixt ] Twixt
|
| Ode:
To the Lakes |
| 29 |
|
its
] it's
|
| Ode:
To Thunder Cape |
| 22 |
|
time-weird
] time-wierd |
| 27 |
|
its
] it's |
| 58 |
|
its ] it's
|
| August
Night, on Georgian Bay |
| 12 |
|
its
] it's |
| 13 |
|
With unheard melodies. While
all agleam, ] With unheard melodies
While all agleam,
|
| Crags |
| 5 |
|
its ] it's
|
| Lazarus |
| 59 |
|
its
] it's |
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