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Non-Fictional
Prose
by
Charles G.D. Roberts
Edited
by D.M.R. Bentley and Laurel Boone
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MR.
BLISS CARMAN'S POEMS*
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Like Rossetti, Mr. Carman had
won an enviable reputation as a poet before he
fairly challenged opinion with a printed book.
From time to time in the magazines appeared verses
of strange flavour, over a name which readers
resolutely mistook for a nom
de plume; and discriminating
ears detected a new voice rising over the sweet
but rather monotonous concord of the general choir.
From time to time, also, come manuscripts and
printed slips, which passed from hand to hand
like Shakespeare’s "sugared sonnets among
his private friends"; and so distinctive
and penetrating a quality was there in these flying
leaflets, that the praise of them went far beyond
the circle of their readers. People who had never
seen a line of Mr. Carman’s came to hear his name
so often that they grew curious about him. And
presently there arose a demand for a volume of
his verse. In the gratification of this demand,
Mr. Carman showed no indiscreet haste; but at
last he has put forth a small volume of lyrics,
under the title of "Low Tide on Grand Pré."
This
collection, being made up of poems exclusively
in the minor key, leaves unrepresented one side
of Mr. Carman’s genius,—a side which is of particular
importance in these dilettante days. Certain poems
in the periodicals have shown him to possess a
joyous major note, masculine and full-throated.
But in the quieter moods and more reserved measures
of the volume before me, his distinctive qualities
are not less unmistakably displayed. One of these
is a combination of verbal simplicity with an
extreme complexity of suggestion and intention.
He is master of the inevitable phrase, the unforgetable
cadence. As far as technique is concerned, this,
I think, is his peculiar achievement. His lyric
utterance is thoroughly individual, and in its
music so fresh and alluring that its influence
is quickly apparent in the verse of contemporaries.
His style has that distinction which, in the case
of an older writer, we would call the mark of
the master, and which declares its authority by
attracting disciples or imitators. It is in many
such stanzas as this:—
Because
I am wanderer
Upon the roads of
endless quest,
Between the hill-wind and the hills,
Along the margin men
call rest.
It
is in all that perfect and impassioned lyric called
"A Northern Vigil," of which I must
quote some portions:—
"I
sit by the fire and hear
The restless wind
go by,
On the long dirge and drear,
Under the low
bleak sky.
"When day puts out to sea
And night makes in
for land,
There is no lock for thee,
Each door awaits thy
hand!
* * *
"When
the zenith moon is round,
And snow-wraiths gather
and run,
And there is set no bound
To love beneath the
sun,
"O wayward will, come near
The old mad wilful
way,
The soft mouth at my ear
With words too sweet
to say!
* * *
"The
windows of my room
Are dark with bitter
frost,
The stillness aches with doom
Of something loved
and lost.
* * *
"And
though thy coming rouse
The sleep-cry of no
bird,
The keepers of the house
Shall tremble at thy
word.
"Come, for the soul is free!
In all the vast dreamland
There is no lock for thee,
Each door awaits thy
hand.
* * *
"Yea,
wilt thou not return,
When the late hill-winds
veer,
And the bright hill-flowers burn
With the reviving
year?
* * *
"The
curtains seem to part;
A sound is on the
stair,
As if at the last... I start;
Only the wind is there."
When
memorable line or inescapable grace of turn and
fall it waylays us deliciously in almost every
poem of the collection. It is the whole charm
of the flawless fragment called "A Sea-Drift":
"As
the seaweed swims the sea
In the ruin after
storm,
Sunburnt memories of thee
Through the twilight
float and form.
"And desire when thou art gone
Roves his desolate
domain,
As the meadow-birds at dawn
Haunt the spaces of
the rain."
Of
poetry, half is in the manner, half in the matter.
Mr. Carman’s matter is not less distinctive than
his manner. Whatever concerns of the human heart
may occupy his song,—pain or pleasure, love or
death, a memory or a desire,—the voice of nature
is always making itself heard. He does not transcribe
nature, or set himself to interpret her; but in
terms of her all his emotions express themselves.
He can no more escape her than can the strings
of the æolian harp escape the wind. In his lines
we hear the irresponsible, elusive speech of the
rain, the trees, the grasses; we catch hints of
the incalculable purpose of wind and sea. He is
elemental. The savour of nature is in his grain,
as the salt of the sea is through and through
the fibre of a bit of driftwood.
In
the case of a poet so significant and vital, it
is worth while trying to trace his poetic lineage.
It seems to me that Mr. Carman derives in the
main from Emerson and Swinburne,—a strange and
piquant blend. But the fusion is complete, the
influences not to be detected without careful
analysis. A study of Arnold, too, has doubtless
helped Mr. Carman much, contributing to his purity
of phrase. And here and there we feel that he
has been conscious, not altogether to his advantage,
of the spell of Browning. As a stimulus and an
awakener Browning is admirable, but as a master
he is dangerous. He will not fuse. In the work
of those whom he has influenced his influence
gathers in little intractable nodules.
This
brief note is concerned not with the defects but
with the beauties of Mr. Carman’s work, because
when an admirable poet has arisen it is the duty
of the critic to call the attention of readers
to the new delight that has come within their
reach. Nevertheless, as the critic’s authority
is apt to be called in question unless he shows
himself on the alert for flaws, I shall proceed
with diffidence to point out what seem to me to
be Mr. Carman’s weaknesses. His structure is often
defective,—he is not always careful in regard
to the architectonics of verse. Many of his poems
are built as waywardly as a dream, and one sometimes
feels that parts of one poem might as easily fit
into the framework of another. He has a tendency
to repeat his effects; and while his poems are
sharply differentiated from those of other poets,
they are also, at times, a curious and bewildering
intricacy of thought which may justly be called
obscurity; but this is a fault which Mr. Carman
is rapidly eliminating from his work.
The
volume before me is one of the second edition
of "Low Tide on Grand Pré." As a piece
of book-making it is so artistic and satisfying
that I can not refrain from complimenting the
publishers upon it. |
"Mr.
Bliss Carman's Poems," Chap-Book
1:3, 15 June 1894, 53-57 [back]
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